lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

The Ring "Anita´s description" (by Mica, Lula and Fabi)


Anita was very beautiful, she was the most beautiful girl in the village. Everyone loved her.
She was a good girl and all the young man dreamet of her and wanted to marry her.
She also was clever. Anita was very good at reading and telling stories.
But her parents gave her everything she wanted. She could do anything she liked. She never worked or helped her mother in the house, her hands were always clean and beautiful. Her fingernails were long and pink, they were never broken or bitten.
Anita’s father, Rodrigo, wanted her to marry a rich businessman, who lived in the city.
She became proud and lazy. Her voice was very loud and clever.
Most people loved her.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Fantastic!! Just change: "...young men dreamt..." "She never worked or helped..." "...wanted her to marry a rich..." "Most people ..."