jueves, 19 de junio de 2008

Our city (by alan)

Argentina is very good place to live or for vacation but is so much polluted. First we must dont throw de rubbish to the street. We must throw in a litter and if there are no litters we must wait to get home.
There are so much factory's fumes who pollute all the air. It is bad for us. We need a solution.
We should dont waste the water because in future is going to be no more water.
Another problem is that there is so much insecurity in the street. For example tu many places we cant go alone in the street. There must be more policesman in the street to be more secure to walk in the street.
If we do thatArgentina will be a better place than now

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Good! Just correct: "...but it is very ..." "...mustn't throw the ..."" ...it in the rubbish bins...no rubbish bins...""...many factories ...which pollute..." "...shouldn't...in the future there's not going to be any water." "...we can't go to many places alone." " ...policemen ..."