lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

Anita's description

Anita:
She was the most beautiful girl. Every body loved her because they belived that she was an excelent person.
She was a good and inteligent girl, and how she didn't go to school, her father was her teacher.
Anita was very good at reading and telling, so she told stories to the children and other people of the village. Also, she knew write.
Her father wanted to, her daughter, married with an important and rich man.
The people said that she loved Rafael, and Rafael loved her, but her father didn't want to she married with somebody of this village.

By: Julieta Braverman, Florencia Gorosito y Paula esquinazi.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Nice work! Just change: "Everybody ... believed ...excellent ..." "... intelligent and since she didn't..." "...telling stories..." "Also she knew how to write." "wanted her daughter to marry an important..." "...didn't want her to marry somebody...from..."