viernes, 30 de mayo de 2008

My invention (by Flor Gorosito)

All the people think who invented the telephone was Alexander Grahan Bell…. But the really inventor was Meucci. He stole Meucci's idea .But the really inventor was him . This was discovered in 2002. He invented this to connect the office whit his bedroom, he needed this because his wife was ill, and she can’t down and up the stairs.
This was the much important invention in the century.

1 comentario:

Susan Zilberstein dijo...

Great job! Just correct: "People think that the man who...Graham..." "...the real ..." "...real..." "...invented it ....with...needed it ...she coudn't walk up..." "...the most important..."